I could feel a swirl of dust on my feet.
I could hear a machine dashing upon the ground.
I could see pitch black because it was too bright to look up and then see all that was in front of me.
The taste of dust almost made me cough.
I thought of what the swirl of wind in my ear
Wow Devon what a descriptive piece of writing. You have carefully chosen words that make me feel like I am back there, in that moment. I wonder what else you could write that would describe a special moment to your reader.
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